Retaliation Revoked in The MLB – Essay 4 Final

MLB needs to Revoke Retaliation

Retaliation has bin an impact to the Major League Baseball for several years. Retaliation is a way of revenge by doing something to the other team because of their actions. But recently it has bin out of control and consequences needs to be enforced. Pitchers have bin throwing pitches to batters up high or even in the low part of there body as a warning to the other team. This leads to retaliation to other team, as the other pitcher will do the same and chaos erupts. The benches will clear and the officiating crew has to take action to resolve the conflict. My question is this, why doesn’t the league give out harsh punishments for pitches to the head? The MLB has only fined pitchers and giving them a small suspension. This is a very serious issue that needs to be resolved! Batters have bin severely injured from this issue and where some have to end there career because of this tragic controversy. But Kurjian believes retaliation should be allowed due to the fact that the players are trying to protect one another by the opponents actions. Retaliation needs to be revoked in the MLB due to the fact that it is causing a unsafe environment during the game due to the fact its causing too many injuries such as concussions or even brain trauma.

A recent conflict of retaliation has occurred when the Boston Red Sox faced the Baltimore Orioles in Baltimore. Third baseman Manny Machado illegally slide to second base and injured Red Sox star Dustin Pedoria for a couple days. The Red Sox retaliated on the next day when Matt Barnes purposely threw a high fast ball to the head of Machado. This is the wrong way to retaliate in baseball. Throwing a fastball to a defensive batter to the head is wrong due to that fact it could severely injured him permanently. Barnes was only suspended four games which is shocking! This suspension should be longer to discipline the pitcher’s actions. However this situation went on for numerous days as the Red Sox still continued to retaliate by attempting to hit Machado in Boston.  On May 1, Machado’s post game stated “They’re still thinking the slide that I did when I had no intention of hurting anybody,’’ Machado said. “And I’m still trying to get hit at. Thrown at my (expletive) head. (Expletive) thrown at everywhere. MLB should do something about it. (Expletive) pitchers go out there with their (expletive) balls in their hand and throwing 100 mph trying to hit people. I got a (expletive) bat too. I can go up there and crush somebody if I wanted to, but you know what, I’ll get suspended for the year and the pitcher will only get suspended for two games”(qtd. Nihtengale).

Retaliation in the MLB has become a bit of a hot topic in the recent years. But the way these players handle it, is becoming dangerous.  Batters have gotten pitched to the head and are usually diagnosed with concussions. This situation with the concussion protocol can take a long time for the batters to play again. By law no athlete cannot perform any sport activity until cleared of the protocol.  This incident can lead to brain trauma from pitches to the head. This conflict can take weeks, months, or even years to recover from the injury but sometimes the brain could become permanently damaged an have no choice to retire for their safety. Retaliation is unfortunately  not a rule to follow in the MLB policy which is truly unacceptable. The MLB can only just give harsh consequences by ejecting the players and giving them small suspensions.  Retaliation is no a everyday affair in the MLB, we never know when retaliation can occur. But we can determine when retaliation when a pitcher doesn’t like what batters does after at bat or even if a pitcher is frustrated with he game.  This can lead to the beginning of retaliation. I wonder why it is “ok” to throw a 90 mph fastball at a batter and possibly injuring him to prove a point.  At the end of the day we all know that we don’t know where the ball will go at any point when the pitchers throws it. But when conflicts has happened prior before hitting a batter, its a bit clearer that it is a sign of “payback”.

A famous baseball from the Boson Red Sox named Tony Conigliaro was struck in the face by Jack Hamilton which led to a dislocation to his jaw, crack left cheekbone and damaged his retina in his left eye. The writer states that Tony was losing his eye vision the next fours after this conflict(Silva). After returning 4 years later, the game he loved Tony played for 21 gamed and was playing DH. This lead him to retire at an early age because of a horrific tragic one day. Eight years later, at the  age of 45 Tony Conigliaro passed away in a coma. This pitch to the head gives proof of how dangerous pitchers can retaliate and could end careers or even lives. Tony;s death will never be forgotten in the MLB; as one pitch changed his life forever.

To clarify on retaliation in the MLB [Fielder] points out that throwing a ball at a batter that is 90 mph or faster is assault”It’s only between the foul lines that a violent felony is instead viewed as enforcing the game’s unwritten rules. But that’s the biggest problem in stopping such assaults. Batters are being targeted by pitchers an could be severely injured and where it can become an assault.  Nobody can agree on what the game’s unwritten rules are—presumably because they’re not codified and are thus subject to the whims of the various players and managers interpreting them that day.” [Fielder] points out that pitchers are enforced to do this by there head coach due to the fact the other team had offended them. This however becomes a war on the field with the pitchers hitting the opposing batter and where retaliation is considered to be an unwritten rule.

(Kurkjian) points out that retaliation is good to have in the MLB.  Players need to retaliate through pitchers to hit the batters because of the batters actions before. Pitchers are usually told to hit a certain player or even a innocent player at the opposing team to prove a point. (Kurkjian) states that players sometimes wait for years to retaliate to a certain player because of there actions years ago. “The first pitch in batting practice, Farmer hit Gross right in the middle of the back with a fastball at 90 mph.”

“What was that for!” Gross screamed at Farmer.

“That was for three years ago!” Farmer yelled at Gross.

“OK,” Gross said.

Usually when a pitcher has hit the opposing batter at least once, they feel like there even and everything is fine. Retaliation makes this sport very interesting when pitchers retaliate and also fans enjoy it when both teams clear the benches due to the actions that occurred. Pitchers unusually retaliate with the first batter they pitch t after there teammate was struck. The pitcher wants to send a message to the other team and wanting to be even with the other team after the conflict.  But it just leads to chaos because the other team will retaliate due to that which forms a chain in the game.

In conclusion to this topic, will next year be the year the MLB organization to do something about this? A long suspension when hitting the batter up high and banning retaliation  should be the solution to this topic. The MLB needs to protect there batters when approaching to the batters box. I understand that pitchers retaliate when there own teammates get hurt through illegal slides,  pitches, or even being taunted by the opposing teammate. But let the committee handle the situation off the field with consequences and not allow pitchers to retaliate. Retaliation in the MLB becomes an assault in the game when pitchers hit batters as a sign of “payback”. With retaliation revoked in the MLB, the batters and other players will be a bit more safer and not targeted by pitchers.

Kurkjian, Tim. “Will L.A. Retaliate against San Diego?” ESPN. ESPN Internet Ventures, 15 Apr. 2013 

Sports, Bob Nightengale. “Orioles’ Manny Machado Blasts Red Sox: ‘I Lost All Respect for That Organization’.” USA Today. Gannett Satellite Information Network, 03 May 2017.

Felder, Adam. “Battering the Batter.” The Atlantic. Atlantic Media Company, 05 May 2015.

Lennon, David. “Lennon: Payback Pitches Need to Be Thrown out.” Newsday. N.p., 30 Apr. 2017. Web. 04 May 2017.

Essay 5 Photo- Essay “Retaliation in Sports” Final

The Rays should of never hit Jeter period! You were up 6-1 in the 8th inning and I completely agree why the Yankees retaliated in the bottom of the 8th inning. This video is how I think retaliation should be allowed in the MLB. Pitchers should not throw at batters in the head or up high. Throwing at the batters in the body area is still wrong though but less likely to get severely hurt if thrown up high.

“Benches clear after Yanks retaliate after HBP” YouTube, uploaded by MLB, 17 September 2014, https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RAWvfKPMlmI&feature=youtu.be

https://youtu.be/lUUYNpzVXcI

This was by far such a dirty block to a defenseless defender. The play wasn’t going towards their direction and the receiver should of stopped and also it was extremely late when he chop blocked him. What surprised me the most was their wasn’t an ejection from this illegal block. Talib’s actions the next play was understandable but in the process he cost the team a penalty and possible a fine. Playing fire with fire is simply wrong to do because usually you will get the same treatment by being penalized and even fined for retaliating.

 

“Tempers Flare in Tennessee After Harry Douglas’ Low Block on Chris Harris Jr. | NFL Wk 14 Highlights” YouTube, uploaded by NFL, 11 December 2016 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lUUYNpzVXcI&feature=youtu.be

Talk about a cheap shot by Orpik.  He completely took Erikson who didn’t return and  is smaller then him. Thortons hit and wanting to fight was really understandable. Thorton was just trying to protect his teammate after he got hurt and it was wrong for a big man to hit someone who is smaller then him. But what was uncalled for was definitely the cheap shot when the play was over.  Thorton going to Orpik an putting him down and throwing a couple of punches.

 

“Orpik Hit and Thornton retaliation” YouTube, uploaded by Matt Tempest, 24 February 2014 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VfRgnV96IqY&feature=youtu.be

 

Rabin’s cheap shot after the play was uncalled for. That was bound to happen when he was hit and his teammates retaliated by pushing the opposing teammate on the floor. I don’t really see nothing wrong with this retaliation. No one got severely hurt which is good. But Rabin’s teammate, after the fight was over should never pushed hit the player again as it costed his team a penalty. Sometimes its not worth to retaliate in any sport because at the end of the day your gonna punish yourself with either a penalty, fine or even ejected.

“MICHAEL NOONE’S BIG HIT ON PAUL RABIL | Major League Lacrosse” YouTube, uploaded by Lacrosse  All Stars , 16 August 2016 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=i-_Uat8Assw&feature=youtu.be

 

This was the most recent conflict in the MLB with retaliation. For a week everyone has bin talking about Machado’s illegal slide that injured Pedroia  and the way Boston Red Sox retaliated. While I was observing the slide, Manny didn’t seem to purposely injure Pedroia. He was trying to keep him up when slid right to his ankle when he went over the base. The way Boston retaliated was truly unacceptable , dangerous , and just simply wrong. Red Sox pitcher Barnes threw a high fastball to the head of Manny was dangerous. This could of severely injured him with brain trauma or a concussion. Suspending Barnes was the right move but should of bin a longer suspension. The next conflict with Sale throwing low at Machado was still uncalled for. Once was fine with hitting the batter to prove a point, but you need to let things go. Manny’s frustration in his press conference was very reasonable but maybe less profanity would of bin better.

 

“Sox-Orioles Beef Bad for MLB? – The fireworks between the Red Sox and the Orioles c” YouTube, uploaded by Sport My Life , 3 May 2017 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LicDWm0Dj9A&feature=youtu.be

This was definitely a unprofessional  move by both players. I player pinching another player was very childish but the way Draymond Green retaliated with a hard punch to the weak wrist to Harden on the court was simply wrong. But what angered me about it was when Green approached the ref to ask why he got a foul. Your not suppose to punch anybody and usually the refs would give a flagrant foul or even a ejection.

“Draymond Green Admits To Punching James Harden In Retaliation For Getting Pinched” YouTube, uploaded by NBA Now , 1 April 2017 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2DdG-T8cGA4&feature=youtu.be

 

As a captain for your team, it was the right thing to do when your teammate went down by an illegal check. Even though Chara is bigger and taller he retaliated by going after the player and fighting him. In any sport teammates back up one another and for Chara’s actions it was honestly the right thing he did. He wanted to prove a point by sending a message to the opposing team to not mess with teammates.  There is usually that one person on every team that does retaliation when their teammate goes down or gets picked on.

“Zdeno Chara vs Alexei Emelin FIGHT (After Alexei Emelin Crosschecks Tyler Seguin) NHL 3/3/2013” YouTube, uploaded by HDHockeyDude , 3 March 2013 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YqOBYVgmWzk&feature=youtu.be

 

 

Cover Letter

Cover Letter

 

 

Dear, Portfolio Committee:

As a writer, I have learned so much before entering this course but I knew there was a lot more to learn to become an efficient writer. I have learned so many ways to perform well as writer by using the MLA format. For about five years I have used this format but I know as a college writer there is more to learn. I have had struggled briefly when it comes to researching assignments. Learning how to use proper in text citation when given credit to authors was a struggle. I have always made minor errors when across it by citing it before each sentence. I knew that in the college level it’s mandatory to use in text situation when it comes to do researching. As a writer for me I have learned how to summarize work and shortening it use it in essays.  It’s a very useful skill to have when analyzing long pieces of work; then to give a brief summary of the work you analyzed. In the college level of writing, it can be frustrating when writing because of how technical you must be. But thanks to professor Pappas, she has taught me so much with college writing.

My first piece that I chose was going back in time about my first time playing high school football.  Writing my personal essay”Time to Shine” was happiness to me. Try to remember every detail was a struggle though. But my main goal was to give the readers a clear image of what I experienced and making them feel like they were to actually there. As you read it, you can picture the scenery of a special night that changed my football career in high school. In parts of this special essay, I explain how I feel from the beginning of the essay where I started football until the end of the essay when a football game ends.

My second piece was the visualizing essay “Love for Soccer” where my brother and his friends playing soccer game indoors, where no matter how old you are, and these people are so passionate for the sport they love. That day was very fun to observe and also be able to talk to them while they were playing. The people were intelligent and they allowed me to ask questions when the game was over. The struggle part about this is figuring out what each topic for each paragraph I was going to write. The paragraph structure was by far the biggest issue for me to do. I tend to add multiple sentences where some sentences don’t connect to the main idea of the paragraph. But after finishing this piece of work I proof read it over and finally it had hit me that I had made simple errors. Reading sentences or paragraphs over for me gives me a clear understanding of what I am trying to write but just simply placing it in the wrong paragraph.

Text wrestling was by far the most difficult one to write. Having to pick a side of the topic of “Should the NCAA give up on Amateurism” was hard to decide due to the fact that I agreed but disagreed with the topic. I had trouble analyzing the article to create my own summary was very complex because I had to figure out which pieces of the article are important.  The research part was a bit tricky to find evidence to back up the authors claim. Research essay’s was by far my biggest weakness in writing. I had gone over my essay numerous times to make sure it was properly written with MLA format, a proper work cited page and in text citations. I had to revise this work a couple of times due to the fact I didn’t use proper in text citations. But my issue could of bin easily resolved by using my resources around me. The website Purdue University helped me a lot with properly citing college essays. After finishing this essay I’ve learned so much of how to properly write research essays and knowing that you have so much resources that can help you become a successful writer.

English 101 has taught me much so to become an excellent writer and I can’t wait to face my next challenge, English 102. Research essays are so much easier for me to write now than before I entered this course. From stepping into this course I had a bit of confidence that I would be a good writer but thanks to professor Pappas, she pushed me to work hard in my writing. With her, she gave me so much confidence with her guidance to help me with my writing skills. I would say I accomplished my goal in English 101 by overcoming my weakness in writing which is researching essays. I know in the rest of my college life, college writing will help me accomplish a lot in my Engineering program in the future.  I want  to thank you for taking the time to read my pieces of work for this course.

 

Sincerely,

Colby Martin

Time to Shine-Essay 1

Colby Martin

Holly Pappas

English-101

23 February 2016

 

Time to Shine

 

In 2012, I was 15 years old and I signed up for football for high school. I was excited and ready to go to work with training and practicing. Our team trained every Monday and Wednesday after practice at 6:30 with film on Tuesday’s. Despite all the hard work I did with my weight lifting and practicing my designed positions on the team, I was not a starter on the team. Since I was not a starter this made me feel bitter and disappointed. Half of the players on our team were a lot taller and stronger, the coaches declared them as the starters, and the rest of us were on the bench. However, I know that you should never give up on what you want to achieve. I was designated to play left tackle on offense and nose tackle on defense. When practices were over, every Wednesday and Thursday I would continue to do weight lifting to become stronger and hoping to become a starter. After practice I would ask my coaches for some pointers to improve such as my pass blocking, quickness, and driving the offensive lineman quickly. Until one day during a special game, all of my bitterness and disappointment diminished.

On Thursday October 18, 2012, my football team Voc-Tech Bears faced the Bishop Stang Spartans. It was a cold, windy, and rainy day. The field was muddy and slippery while doing our pre-game warm ups. The sky was dark we could hardly see the bright yellow football posts .Our family and friends were located behind our bench supporting us with umbrellas, coffees and raincoats. It was hard to see the fans behind us with the rain and the day being dark but we knew they were there when they chanted “LETS GO BEARS!”  It was hard for fans to see the other team’s jerseys since they wore a dark red while our jerseys were bright white. During the first half, I watched all the starters play while a bunch of us just stood side by side on the white line hoping we could get a chance to play. Our team had played very poorly as we gave up 21 points and we could not score. I will always remember the time on the third drive for us we tossed the football to our running back to the right and he missed the ball and slipped while there defense end scooped it up and ran it for the touchdown. I would never forget the words coach Methia said after that play” COME ON GUYS! WE NEED TO PLAY BETTER!” As the first half was ending, our team huddled up and said, “We need to make a comeback the next HALF!” Everyone on the field and the crowd was silent after this stunning performance.

The second half began, we got the ball very quickly in the second half, and we had to go to work. Our quarterback Austin threw a quick pass to our tall receiver Nick for a 35-yard gain. Three plays later, our running back Donavan scored a touchdown. After going for the two-point conversion, we had to kickoff the football but our team was one man short on the field. Our coach realized we were one man short on the kickoff unit and we needed to add someone to fill in the spot. The player who was designed to start on the kickoff team got hurt in the second quarter and did not return into the game. I knew this had to be the perfect opportunity for me to show the coach I deserve to become a starter. I asked coach to let me go onto the field and become the replacement. Coach said,” Go Martin, you’re on the far right side!” I went on the field ready to go and determined. My emotions were changing every second onto the field with happiness, fear, but extremely nervous. I was not sure what to expect considered that this was my first time playing. Would I make things worse or help this team as I said in my head? Our kicker kicked the football on the opposite part of the field and I ran as fast as I can down the right hash mark and luckily, the ball went to my side. I ran past the first two defenders and I was face to face with the receiver, I tackled him by the waste but at the same time, I managed to make him fumble the ball by hitting it with my left hand. When he fumbled it, we managed to recover it. My whole body was full of mud and wet rain, and everyone was excited. I was so happy that I forced the fumble and recovering the ball. My teammates had high fived me, and nodded helmets to one another when going back to the bench. Coach Methia pulled me aside, said “Good Job Martin!”, and then “You will remain on the Kicking Team.” The offense went back on the field and we scored another touchdown and went for two again on a run play again to bring the score to 21-16 in last minute of the third quarter. The comeback in this dark weather could actually happen.

 

The fourth quarter had started and both teams struggled to get a first down for the first 11 minutes. We were still down by five with less than 4 minutes left in the game and the other team had the ball. I was feeling nervous that we were going to lose but so anxious to get back on the field .Coach told me to go in and play nose tackle, which is also known as the defensive tackle. The first few snaps I did not use the correct techniques when going up against offensive lineman. Coach pulled me aside, told me to go low and to grab the inside of the shoulder pads and drive him back. On the next play, the other team ran the ball in the side on my right side and I knew that I had to make this play because if I did not, they could run the clock out and win the game. When the quarterback hiked the ball, I did exactly what coach Methia told me to do and it worked flawlessly. I drove the center backward and then I pushed my body to the right to shed myself away from the center to wrap my hands around the running back for the tackle. I was so energetic and pumped because I stopped him from getting a first down. I was extremely proud of myself for what I did and I was fired up. I was on the sideline side by side with my teammates who were a bit cold but excited that we could win the game.  We got the ball back and three plays later, we were in the redzone, which is in the opponent’s 20-yard line, but time was not our friend. We had only one time out left and with only 21 seconds left in the game.  We ran a toss play to the left for about a 12-yard gain but the opponent players kept our running back in bounds, so our coach had to call the final timeout. We only had one play to run until the clock hit zero on the scoreboard. Coach decided to run a “JET Sweep Toss to the Left” which is when both wide receivers from both ends run behind the quarterback and the receiver on the right gets the ball and runs left.  The play worked perfectly during practice but during the game with rain with the field being muddy, we could hardly see anything. We hiked the ball and so far the play was working and our receiver Alex was only two yards away from scoring. Alex decided to jump into the end zone to score, which was the only way because three defenders were waiting for him on the white line. I could see Alex jumping towards the white line, and saw the football crossing the white line, and we won the game! We all jumped on one another with joy and happiness as well as our fans cheering that we won.

Our team could not believe we came back from 21 points to win 22-21 in the last second and could hardly see. After shaking hands with the other team coach pulled me aside “Well done, you proved yourself to be a starter”, all I could say was ‘Thank you Coach”. All I could think of after the game is what would have happened if I didn’t receive my chance on the field during the kickoff, none of this possibly could have happened. Everyone deserves to have a chance to prove yourself or achieve your goal. All of my hard work during practice and weight lifting paid off during a special game that changed my football life in high school. I will never forget this day in my entire life.

Love for Soccer-Essay 2

Colby Martin

Holly Pappas

English 101

29 March 2017

 

Love for Soccer

It was a bright early cold morning when I arrived at the RSR Soccer Center located in New Bedford. The two teams arrived at the field warming up with stretches, and passing the soccer ball.  All the players were Portuguese and they are friends with one another off the field, but they play a friendly competitive game. The Portuguese culture play’s a lot of soccer with one another, and to continue it some of the people played every Sunday during the winter until summer leagues started.  The cool part about this experience was I was able to observe on the bench while watching and I was the only person in the audience.  This activity is a way to form a community with one another in the Portuguese culture. My older brother is non Portuguese who plays for the black in the game. Robert is non Portuguese has faced numerous challenges when he started to play with older man. This story will demonstrate how much passionate these players are for soccer and how my brother Robert adapts himself into the Portuguese culture to play with the other guys.

This soccer game always occurs every Sunday morning at around 7-7:30. The field was very small with no nets and a net on the ceiling so that it will not hit any pipes up top. The field was made of turf and it was really rough and not slippery. On one side of the field there was a bench area for both teams to rest, and the other side had a glass board for friends and families to observe. One team wears a black shirt while the other team wears a yellow or green shirt.  I saw all the players changing their shoes with cleats, putting protective shin guards or ankle wrapping if they want, and some of them had to change their pants or shirts. A lot of the players on the two teams are a lot older than young. This impressed me that they continue to play soccer, because a lot of them are in good shape and are so competitive. A lot of the older men have tough jobs outside such as construction, landscaping and working for the city. During the game I noticed that the yellow team had a lot more players to play and it became easier to substitute players, while the black team didn’t have a lot of players which meant that most players had to play for numerous minutes. These players on the field are so passionate in this sport, so they play aggressive but off the field there respectful to one another. As I watched most players would be on the field nonstop to play. Usually a player would be down a man for a about 2-3 minutes for players to take a breather or a drink. My brother Robert who is on the black team said “a lot of people sometimes don’t show up on our, and some of the other players on the yellow team come to our side for the game.”

The indoor game is a five on five for an hour and a half with substitutions. The players can make their own substitutions by telling the other players to switch when they get tired.  This game had no referees or coaches and players can call their own fouls. The game was a very quick fast pace every minute. There were so many passes back an fourth and I couldn’t keep my eye on the ball. The players would run so quick back and forth with the ball and doing skillful moves. The score was extremely high but no one cared who won or loss because all they cared about was having fun. All the players play hard on the field by aggressively attacking or playing hard defense such as hard slides to move the ball away from the net. Some players would push the players off with a small shove to receive the ball to pass it to their teammates. During the game there were a few collisions when approaching ball but no one got hurt. Some of the players were sliding to kick the ball away from the net so the other team wouldn’t score. Halfway into the game the ball went out of play to my side of the bench and almost hit me. I said to myself “Wow these guys play hard and aggressive out there.” The players on the bench were speaking mostly Portuguese and some English but it was hard for me to understand; at some moments they were all laughing with one another. The players on the field were talking to the bench players during the game by saying jokes and the way there were playing.

Robert is my brother who is a young competitive player who has fun playing soccer. He has continued to play soccer after high school to be active and to have fun playing the sport with his friends. He loves the soccer so much that he plans on playing for the rest of his life. My brother has battle through several injuries that he told me that impacted his life. Two years ago he had a severe ankle sprain that couldn’t let him play for months. During a game he was playing, one of the new players on the other team “hacked” him which is when a player slides into another person’s leg. “The game can be very aggressive on the field but off the field, everyone is friendly and respectful”, said Robert. Last year he suffered another injury on the same field but different game; my brother slid to force the ball out of bounds and gave himself a turf burn which made his knee cap bleed and had to go the ER. This affected off the field and on the field with soccer and work. But my brother didn’t stop playing even though he had these crazy injuries. My brother wears a brace for his ankle and also uses tape around the brace so he does not injure his ankle again.

High school soccer made every player play there hardest out every game to win while this indoor game is still competitive but isn’t worth anything. In high school signals was always made every time to pass with words such as “A”, “Yo yo” or even waiving your hand up to get your teammates attention. Robert is non Portuguese who plays for the black team and he has been playing soccer since high school. The others players welcomed him into their culture with the way they play soccer. He would change his play style and interaction to fit with them such as playing the game fast past. The players would mainly speak Portuguese in the game; which forced Robert to adjust himself with their language by understanding the meanings of the words that are being spoken in the game. Some words that were spoken was “fica” (stay), “pass aqui” (pass it here), “calma” (relax), “abra” (open) and “shoota” (shoot). He told me it took some time to adjust with their play style in the beginning with quick passes and communicating, but now he is very good in the game today.  Robert told me that playing with these guys is a lot of fun and not pressured as he was in high school. In high school he told me “I played with Portuguese kids but more pressure to do well and being competitive.” Today Robert is not pressured to perform well, and is just having fun now with the older guys.

 

When the game was over, everyone shook each other’s hand and also mine when I was observing on the bench. When I was about to leave, everyone was having some food while taking their gear off. Usually after they leave they all meet up to a place such as a bar, restaurant, or a person’s house to eat, drink, and talk. Being around one another by hanging out or doing activity is a good way to show your subculture. This gathering after a fun competitive game forms a sense of community with one another. This whole experience was amazing when watching my brother play on the field with others. It was awesome to observe this scenery on the bench and also going onto the field to pass the soccer ball to the players. Indoor soccer is very different to regular soccer with different rules, regulations, and how everyone acts to each other.

The Olympics Show Why College Sports Should Give Up on Amateurism- Essay 3

Colby Martin

Holly Poppas

English 101

18 April 2017

 

The Olympics Show Why College Sports Should Give Up on Amateurism

The NCAA (National College Athletic Association) is the organization that manages the whole athletic committee across the United States. This organization helps maintain all athletes to follow a policy which contains a set of rules which has been established since the 20th century. The policy the NCAA has used since the 20th century is known as Amateurism.  The main goal of Amateurism is” to ensure the students’ priority remains on obtaining a quality educational experience and that all of student-athletes are competing equitably” (“Amateurism”). Some rules are issued in this article and they are “Salary for participating in athletes”. One rule that athletes must follow is to not pay any athlete to play the sport. The second rule is to ban all athletes to receive any type of revenue from sponsorship’s, earnings from events. The last rule that is issued in the article is to not allow any athletes to delay any academic curriculum in order to go to a sporting event. They are more than three rules for Amateurism but these are the ones that are mainly discussed in the article. These rules established by the NCAA help all athletes to maintain competitiveness equally and to make sure they obtain a quality educational experience. This mandatory policy is an agreement to all athletes to follow, and cannot break any rule or consequences will be enforced. This article “The Olympics Show Why College Sports Should Give Up on Amateurism” is persuading the NCAA to revoke this policy.

Patrick Hruby’s article discusses how the NCAA should remove the Amateurism policy. The Amateurism is when student’s priority is education first and athletes second. In 1960 the Olympics had this policy “no pay-play” but revoked it for all the participants. The author states that there should be nothing wrong with people playing sports for living rather than getting an education. (“Hruby”) Amateurism has created problems across the NCAA such as not allowing free things. For an example Ohio State has banned all football players to receive free tattoos but gives them free tuition, books, board, and while Ivy League school can’t even receive athletic scholarships.   In 1960 Olympics participants who decided to go pro stated they have committed a crime. Playing for sports for a living and getting paid for it breaks the Amateurism policy. Amateurism in Olympics and NCAA had originally come from Victorian England. During the time that being a gentlemen is someone who didn’t work and only did sports as a hobby. According to today ‘s Amateurism, the system had “less to do with high-minded ideas about education than about enforcing a social caste system” (“Hruby”).

In Today’s Amateurism, some players had taken bribes to make money from others such as money handshakes which are when athlete’s handshake people who give the athletes money, to be recruited to an organization, or even to perform bad during a game. The Olympics allowed the participants to get paid as they didn’t pay them. Supporters of the NCAA Amateurism claims “After all, letting student-athletes earn money means paying them a market wage. Which in turn means axing currently subsidized campus sports like tennis and volleyball; fending off inevitable Title IX lawsuits; dealing with a probable athlete union; possibly saying goodbye to the NCAA’s all-important federal tax-exempt status?” (“qtd. in Hruby”). Hruby points out the NCAA should allow the star players and coaches to make profit through sponsorships such as appearing in commercials, cover of video games, shoe companies, and image across America. This would help grow and share the wealth with athletes and the schools sport organization.  But today The NCAA president Mark Emmert thinks if athletes got paid like professors do they would be careless with the money and become unsuccessful. But Hruby believes a student athlete can be a good person and be successful even though being paid in college.

Harris indicates that pros should not be allowed to participate in the Olympics due to the fact it “Takes the fun out of it” (qtd. in Hruby). However Hruby overrules this as the people love to see the pro athletes at the Olympics as they greet them as rock stars. Schwarz indicates that “The biggest lesson of the Olympics is that you shouldn’t listen when somebody says we wouldn’t compensate the talent”(qtd. in Hruby). People don’t care about the money these stars earn but rather to see them compete in action. In the NCAA the fans love to see their school play at high levels. Hruby says “Eliminate amateurism tomorrow, and big-time college football and basketball fans won’t desert en masse; if anything, they might like NCAA sports more, given that hypocrisy and corruption will no longer be core components of the exercise” (“Hruby”).

College Athletes still need to be connected to the college mission which is to prepare all educationally to lead them to be successful in life. But today there not a 100% graduate rate.  Ellen Staurowsky states that the college product is connected to the locale and players would care about their teams rather there amateur or profession (qtd. in Hruby). The NCAA fears that the system would diminish if they withdraw the policy and pay their athletes but as of today there holding onto the policy.

Despite the Olympics leaving the Amateurism Policy, I think the NCAA shouldn’t do the same. College students who are athletes shouldn’t be paid to play their sport no matter how talented they are. When entering college your priority is to do well in your academic career and then your sport career.  College prepares us students to become successful in the future academically. Most athletes don’t make it to the pros and they are in a tight spot. One University has indicated in the NCAA athletes go pro out of college approximately “1.3% Men Basketball, 1.0% Women Basketball, 2.0% Football, 10.5% Baseball, and 4.1% Ice Hockey” (“Dreaming of Becoming a College or Professional Athlete?”). Some of the athletes expect to go pro and don’t care as much in the academic curriculum but later on some fail due to the fact some don’t go pro. In my opinion I think if you’re talented in sports and you do well, then playing sports for living shouldn’t be an issue. Your academic career learning is a great back up when you need to work for a living if sports don’t work out. In the end you should do what you want for a living if you like it.

Players should be allowed to take any money that’s offered such as sponsorships rather than just being offered by the school. An ESPN writer indicates that “colleges and universities are making money off of the backs, performances and success of major football and men’s basketball programs and the scholarship athletes who play them “(“Jackson”). The ESPN writer also points out that the athletes made ” An agreement that is not set up to pay them in ways that is fair in relation to the money the schools make from their participation. It’s rather like taking an unpaid internship to prepare for a better job later in life” (“Jackson”). Most schools tend to give scholarships to the athletes but some of them don’t get a full paid scholarship. As a result some athletes would take bribes or sell prized items given by the school to pay off the debts. Athletes are just finding a way to pay off their debts.  What I do agree with this policy is that athletes shouldn’t be paid to play the sport in the college sport. I don’t agree on Emmert stating that “I believe a student athlete can be a good person and be successful even though being paid in college.” (qtd. in Hruby) Giving all athletes money to play will result in great loss in the NCAA financially. This would become a problem for the schools and the NCAA because they would have to find a way to pay the athletes and teachers who are enrolled there. Despite the colleges are making a huge profit from the athletes, they shouldn’t be allowed to be paid.

Today’s world no school always have 100% graduate rate and you can’t blame that on sports. (Staurowsky)One writer believes that “the college product is connected to the locale and players would care about their teams rather there amateur or profession” (qtd. in Hruby). Some people decide to drop out of school to further on their life by getting a job or going to the services. But some students tend to stay in college to receive a degree in there program or even decide to leave school and go pro if there a talented athlete. If students are talented in sports, they should take the shot by attempting pro even though they aren’t a senior. Some fail and some don’t by going pro but it can be lessons learn in life. These athletes could pursue another career in a program in the college or they could switch sports and see if they could be successful. For an example of being successful in sports program is when NCAA basketball athletes have talented players who are freshman or sophomores and declare the draft.  These athletes are usually an impact to the teams and become successful. In the end, the NCAA should hold the Amateurism policy to a certain extent.

 

Worked Cited

“Amateurism.” NCAA.org– The Official Site of the NCAA. N.P., 24, April 2014. Accessed 3 April 2017.

Dreaming of Becoming a College or Professional Athlete?Article Spotlight” Georgia Career Information Center, Winter 2006. Accessed 5 April 2017.

Hruby, Patrick. “The Olympics Show Why College Sports Should Give Up on Amateurism.” The Atlantic. Atlantic Media Company, 25 July 2012. Accessed 2 April 2017.

Jackson, Scoop. “The Myth of Parity.” ESPN. ESPN Internet Ventures, 12 Sept. 2013. Web. Accessed 5 April 2017.

 

 

Essay 4 MLB needs to revoke Retaliation

Retaliation has bin an impact to the Major League Baseball for several years. Retaliation is a way of revenge by doing something to the other team because of their actions. But recently it has bin out of control and consequences needs to be enforced. Pitchers have bin throwing pitches to batters up high or even in the low part of there body as a warning to the other team. This leads to retaliation to other team, as the other pitcher will do the same and chaos erupts. The benches will clear and the officiating crew has to take action to resolve the conflict. My question is this, why doesn’t the league give out harsh punishments for pitches to the head? The MLB has only fined pitchers and giving them a small suspension. This is a very serious issue that needs to be resolved! Batters have bin severely injured from this issue and where some have to end there career because of this tragic controversy. But Kurjian believes retaliation should be allowed due to the fact that the players are trying to protect one another by the opponents actions. Retaliation needs to be revoked in the MLB due to the fact that it is causing a unsafe environment during the game due to the fact its causing too many injuries such as concussions or even brain trauma.

A recent conflict of retaliation has occurred when the Boston Red Sox faced the Baltimore Orioles in Baltimore. Third baseman Manny Machado illegally slide to second base and injured Red Sox star Dustin Pedoria for a couple days. The Red Sox retaliated on the next day when Matt Barnes purposely threw a high fast ball to the head of Machado. This is the wrong way to retaliate in baseball. Throwing a fastball to a defensive batter to the head is wrong due to that fact it could severely injured him permanently. Barnes was only suspended four games which is shocking! This suspension should be longer to discipline the pitcher’s actions. However this situation went on for numerous days as the Red Sox still continued to retaliate by attempting to hit Machado in Boston.  On May 1, Machado’s post game stated “They’re still thinking the slide that I did when I had no intention of hurting anybody,’’ Machado said. “And I’m still trying to get hit at. Thrown at my (expletive) head. (Expletive) thrown at everywhere. MLB should do something about it. (Expletive) pitchers go out there with their (expletive) balls in their hand and throwing 100 mph trying to hit people. I got a (expletive) bat too. I can go up there and crush somebody if I wanted to, but you know what, I’ll get suspended for the year and the pitcher will only get suspended for two games”(qtd. Nihtengale).

Retaliation in the MLB has become a bit of a hot topic in the recent years. But the way these players handle it, is becoming dangerous.  Batters have gotten pitched to the head and are usually diagnosed with concussions. This situation with the concussion protocol can take a long time for the batters to play again. By law no athlete cannot perform any sport activity until cleared of the protocol.  This incident can lead to brain trauma from pitches to the head. This conflict can take weeks, months, or even years to recover from the injury but sometimes the brain could become permanently damaged an have no choice to retire for their safety. Retaliation is unfortunately  not a rule to follow in the MLB policy which is truly unacceptable. The MLB can only just give harsh consequences by ejecting the players and giving them small suspensions.  Retaliation is no a everyday affair in the MLB, we never know when retaliation can occur. But we can determine when retaliation when a pitcher doesn’t like what batters does after at bat or even if a pitcher is frustrated with he game.  This can lead to the beginning of retaliation. I wonder why it is “ok” to throw a 90 mph fastball at a batter and possibly injuring him to prove a point.  At the end of the day we all know that we don’t know where the ball will go at any point when the pitchers throws it. But when conflicts has happened prior before hitting a batter, its a bit clearer that it is a sign of “payback”.

A famous baseball from the Boson Red Sox named Tony Conigliaro was struck in the face by Jack Hamilton which led to a dislocation to his jaw, crack left cheekbone and damaged his retina in his left eye. The writer states that Tony was losing his eye vision the next fours after this conflict(Silva). After returning 4 years later, the game he loved Tony played for 21 gamed and was playing DH. This lead him to retire at an early age because of a horrific tragic one day. Eight years later, at the  age of 45 Tony Conigliaro passed away in a coma. This pitch to the head gives proof of how dangerous pitchers can retaliate and could end careers or even lives. Tony;s death will never be forgotten in the MLB; as one pitch changed his life forever.

To clarify on retaliation in the MLB [Fielder] points out that throwing a ball at a batter that is 90 mph or faster is assault”It’s only between the foul lines that a violent felony is instead viewed as enforcing the game’s unwritten rules. But that’s the biggest problem in stopping such assaults. Batters are being targeted by pitchers an could be severely injured and where it can become an assault.  Nobody can agree on what the game’s unwritten rules are—presumably because they’re not codified and are thus subject to the whims of the various players and managers interpreting them that day.” [Fielder] points out that pitchers are enforced to do this by there head coach due to the fact the other team had offended them. This however becomes a war on the field with the pitchers hitting the opposing batter and where retaliation is considered to be an unwritten rule.

 

(Kurkjian) points out that retaliation is good to have in the MLB.  Players need to retaliate through pitchers to hit the batters because of the batters actions before. Pitchers are usually told to hit a certain player or even a innocent player at the opposing team to prove a point. (Kurkjian) states that players sometimes wait for years to retaliate to a certain player because of there actions years ago. “The first pitch in batting practice, Farmer hit Gross right in the middle of the back with a fastball at 90 mph.”

“What was that for!” Gross screamed at Farmer.

“That was for three years ago!” Farmer yelled at Gross.

“OK,” Gross said.

Usually when a pitcher has hit the opposing batter at least once, they feel like there even and everything is fine. Retaliation makes this sport very interesting when pitchers retaliate and also fans enjoy it when both teams clear the benches due to the actions that occurred. Pitchers unusually retaliate with the first batter they pitch t after there teammate was struck. The pitcher wants to send a message to the other team and wanting to be even with the other team after the conflict.  But it just leads to chaos because the other team will retaliate due to that which forms a chain in the game.

 

In conclusion to this topic, will next year be the year the MLB organization to do something about this? A long suspension when hitting the batter up high and banning retaliation  should be the solution to this topic. The MLB needs to protect there batters when approaching to the batters box. I understand that pitchers retaliate when there own teammates get hurt through illegal slides,  pitches, or even being taunted by the opposing teammate. But let the committee handle the situation off the field with consequences and not allow pitchers to retaliate. Retaliation in the MLB becomes an assault in the game when pitchers hit batters as a sign of “payback”. With retaliation revoked in the MLB, the batters and other players will be a bit more safer and not targeted by pitchers.

Kurkjian, Tim. “Will L.A. Retaliate against San Diego?” ESPN. ESPN Internet Ventures, 15 Apr. 2013 

Sports, Bob Nightengale. “Orioles’ Manny Machado Blasts Red Sox: ‘I Lost All Respect for That Organization’.” USA Today. Gannett Satellite Information Network, 03 May 2017.

Felder, Adam. “Battering the Batter.” The Atlantic. Atlantic Media Company, 05 May 2015.

Lennon, David. “Lennon: Payback Pitches Need to Be Thrown out.” Newsday. N.p., 30 Apr. 2017. Web. 04 May 2017.

 

 

Peer Review 3

Both paragraphs Didn’t have a clear main idea with supported details. The summary is very brief and not really detailed , only had some key points in the analysis.

You did do well with re wording in the summary. The summary could be a bit more detailed and longer , using quotes in the text to show the argument it bit more clearer.
Try writing in the the summary who published it in the beginning of the summary. Maybe try summarizing the key points in each paragraph and using it when revising the summary.

Essay four Topic Proposal

Two Topics-

Should the NFL start suspending players for illegal hits instead  of large finds?

Should the MLB start suspending and removing pitchers during the game with pitches to the head?

Watching these situations happen on live television has concerned fans , families, and the whole committee. The NFL has started to take action with this situation but how do people feel about it? Some players think it is good to do this but some think that it is taking the fun out of the way tackles turn out. In today so many flags were issued for illegal hits and quite a few of them were not bad. This has frustrated players because we don’t know whats a bad hit or a clean hit these days. When I watch these games I questioned myself with certain hits and they just get flagged” Why doesn’t he get ejected or suspended!”

In the MLB pitchers throw pitches and some hit the players to the head or even the face. Should they be suspended. This could be a yes or no situation. Pitchers do have the ability to control every pitch before the way they throw the ball by the direction. But yes , sometimes pitches do miss the plate and hit the batter not intentionally. But most of these hits do come in payback when it comes to rivalries. Pitchers love to send a message to other team as a warning. But soon it turns to a consistency to both teams and the umpires have to take action. With this situation should the MLB start taking action with minor suspension and if it continues then long suspensions?

Images can be easily issued for either topic. I have done research on these  sports for years since I love to watch it.  All the Images will be descriptive to the topic that is being issued.

Will pitchers be suspended for hitting batters?

Battering The Batter 

Sports Illustrate 

ESPN Retaliation a requirement 

Retaliation an Unwritten rule

Bleacher Report 

Matt Barnes Suspension

Change the rules in MLB

Rule when delivering the pitch

MLB .com rules/policy

Machado’s Postgame Statement 

Brain Injuries

Brain Trauma

Pitchers should be removed from baseball if they retaliate 

Final Draft Text Wrestling

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Holly Poppas

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The Olympics Show Why College Sports Should Give Up on Amateurism

Introduction:

The NCAA (National College Athletic Association) is the government that manages the whole athletic committee across the United States. This government helps maintain all athletes to follow a specific policy that has been established for centuries. The NCAA has used the policy called Amateurism. Amateurism is a set of rules to follow for all athletes to not do. The main goal of this policy is” to ensure the students’ priority remains on obtaining a quality educational experience and that all of student-athletes are competing equitably.” Some rules are issued in this article and they are “Salary for participating in athletes”. This rule refers to all athletes to not be paid as a job in the NCAA. The second rule is “Prize money above actual and necessary expenses” This rule is to ban all athletes to receive any type of revenue from sponsorships, earnings from events. The last rule that is issued in the article is “Delayed initial full- time collegiate enrollment to participate in organized sports competition.”  This refers to all athletes to not delay any academic curriculum in order to go to a sporting event. These rules established by the [NCAA] help all athletes to maintain competitiveness equally and to make sure they obtain a quality educational experience. This policy enforces all athletes to follow this policy and cannot break any rule or consequences will be enforced. This article “The Olympics Show Why College Sports Should Give Up on Amateurism” is persuading the NCAA to revoke this policy.

Summary:

This article is written by Patrick Hruby on [July 25, 2012] and this discusses how the NCAA should remove the Amateurism policy. The Amateurism is when student’s priority is education first and athletes second. In [1960] the Olympics had this policy “no pay-play” but revoked it for all the participants. Patrick states that there should be nothing wrong with people playing sports for living rather than getting an education.  Amateurism has created problems across the NCAA such as not allowing free things. For an example Ohio State has banned all football players to receive free tattoos but gives them free tuition, books, board, and while Ivy League school can’t even receive athletic scholarships.   In 1960 The Olympics participants who decided to go pro stated they have committed a crime. Playing for sports for a living and getting paid for it breaks the Amateurism policy. Amateurism in Olympics and NCAA had originally come from Victorian England. During the time that being a gentlemen is someone who didn’t work and only did sports as a hobby. According to today‘s Amateurism, the system had “less to do with high-minded ideas about education than about enforcing a social caste system”.

In Today’s Amateurism, some players had taken bribes to make money from others such as money handshakes from the program, being recruited, or even after the game. The Olympics allowed the participants to get paid as they didn’t pay them. The NCAA should not pay their players to a market due to the fact it would make a greatly loss to the NCAA’s federal tax exempt status and loss of some sports such as volleyball or tennis, But they should allow the NCAA star players and coaches to make profit through sponsorships such as appearing in commercials, cover of video games, shoe companies, and there image across America. This would help grow and share the wealth with one another.  But today The NCAA president Mark Emmert thinks if athletes got paid like professors do they would be careless with the money and become unsuccessful. But Patrick believes a student athlete can be a good person and be successful even though being paid in college.

Stephan Harris indicates that pro’s should not be allowed to participate in the Olympics because it “Takes the fun out of it”. [Hruby] over rules this as the people love to see the pro’s at the Olympics as they greet them as rock stars. Andy Schwarz points out “The biggest lesson of the Olympics is that you shouldn’t listen when somebody says we wouldn’t compensate the talent,” People don’t care about the money these stars earn but rather to see them compete in action. In the NCAA the fans love to see their school play at high levels. [Hruby] says “Eliminate amateurism tomorrow, and big-time college football and basketball fans won’t desert en masse; if anything, they might like NCAA sports more, given that hypocrisy and corruption will no longer be core components of the exercise.”

 

College Athletes still need to be connected to the college mission which is to prepare all educationally to lead them to be successful in life. But today there not a 100% of graduate rate.  Ellen Staurowsky states that the college product is connected to the locale and players would care about their teams rather there amateur or profession. The NCAA fears that the system would diminish if they withdraw the policy and pay their athletes but as of today there holding onto the policy.

Response:

Despite the Olympics leaving the Amateurism Policy, the NCAA shouldn’t do the same. College students who are athletes shouldn’t be paid to play their sport no matter how talented you are. When entering college your priority is to do well in your academic career and then your sport career.  College prepares us students to become successful in the future academically. Most athletes don’t make it to the pros and they are in a tight spot. Some of the athletes expect to go pro and don’t care as much in the academic curriculum but later on some fail. But I think if you’re talented in sports and you do well, then playing sports for living shouldn’t be an issue. Studying academically but playing sports and decide to do that for a living is fine. Your academic career learning is a great back up when you need to work for a living if sports doesn’t work out. In the end you should do what you want for a living if you like it.

Players should be allowed to take any money that’s offered such as sponsorships rather than just being offered by the school. Most schools tend to give scholarships to the athletes but some of them don’t get a full paid scholarship. As a result some athletes would take bribes or sell prized items given by the school to pay off the debts. Athletes are just finding a way to pay off their debts.  What I do agree with this policy is that athletes shouldn’t be paid to play the sport in the college sport. I don’t agree on [Emmert] stating that “I believes a student athlete can be a good person and be successful even though being paid in college.” Giving all athletes money to play will result in great loss in the NCAA financially. This will result in removing courses and relieving teacher’s duties in order to save money.

 

Today’s world no school always have 100% graduate rate and you can’t blame that on sports. [Staurowsky] believes that “the college product is connected to the locale and players would care about their teams rather there amateur or profession.” Some people decide to drop out of school to further on their life then receiving a degree or even decide to leave school and go pro. If students are talented in sports, they should take the shot by attempting pro even though they aren’t a senior. Some fail and some don’t by going pro but it can be lessons learn in life. For an example, College basketball athletes have talented players who are freshman or sophomores and declare the draft.  These athletes are usually an impact to the teams and become successful. In the end, the NCAA should hold the Amateurism policy to a certain extent.

 

Cited Page:

 

Hruby, Patrick. “The Olympics Show Why College Sports Should Give Up on Amateurism.” The Atlantic. Atlantic Media Company, 25 July 2012

Jcoram. “Amateurism.” NCAA.org– The Official Site of the NCAA. N.P., 24, April 2014